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berry dreaming
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Copyright: Maggi Gargan (Maggi) Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 41] (72)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-25
Categories: Nature
Camera: Olympus SP-800UZ
Exposure: f/3.3, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-16 11:55
Viewed: 2288
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
ok, just started playing, naked with no photoshop fine tuning yet... does it work? grin...
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  • basma2 (0)
  • [2009-11-08 21:55]

Hi Maggi.
Une image fade qui n’est pas mise en valeur et qui semble aussi inachevée.
Il vaut aussi la peine d’utiliser le format maximum pour mettre une image en visuelle .
Basma

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  • Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 64 W: 14 N: 15] (140)
  • [2009-11-20 1:17]

Not really. It's too small to judge, but the twigs in the background are drawing my attention from the main subject. Try to achieve shallower depth of field (there are many sites about it in Google) to blur the background and make the foregroung visible.
You should correct white balance (image is too blueish), make levels correction to make it punchier.

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