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Emerging
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Copyright: Neels Gunter (corjan3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 405 W: 61 N: 331] (3173)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-08-22
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/80 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2014-08-26 16:16
Viewed: 1022
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She will be leaving school shortly and emerge into adult life where she will be doing a hunting course as she plans to become a professional game hunter in due course.
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Hello Neel
What a lovely and beautiful-sincerely smile has been captured
by great details,natural-lights and portrait well done
NEELS GUNTER

Hi Neels,
Well captured,beautiful smile and sparkling eyes. Neat image with no distracting elements. Very pure skin tone, and the red of the lipstick rather eye catching. She should become a model instead of shooting animals.
erwin...

Hi Neels

It always helps to have a pretty model. I like the lighting, the natural smile, the catchlights in her eyes and the slight diagonal line created by you angling the camera perhaps. As your previous posting, the contrast in her face is a little harsh.

I hope you don't mind but I've done a workshop. Mainly because I enjoy doing it.

Neels

She is so lovely and you have chosen a pov that highlights her beautiful smile and it gives a interesting dynamic.
Very good details and I like the soft bg.

Nice pic Neels.
Of course a beautiful model always helps and is part of good portraiture to show the visible and invisible beauty of the model (that's what always taught Master Roger Minkow).
All this you get here.
Rgds.
R.

Hello Neels! What a beautiful girl, amazing young woman. Superb smile! Excellent eyes. Nice lightness, very nice natural colours. Good exposure, very good contrast and sharp. Well done!

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