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Johannesburg


Johannesburg
Photo Information
Copyright: Barry Richter (BarryR) (93)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-04-22
Categories: Mood
Camera: Nikon D5100, Sigma 18 - 200mm DC
Exposure: f/4, 4 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2016-08-31 2:12
Viewed: 1499
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Johannesburg skyline. This image was captured during an outing arranged by the camera club I belonged to.
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Hi Barry

When I first looked at this I thought the horizon being in the middle didn't work. But I think its the square format. It leaves too much space top and bottom. Apart from that, quite good.

I hope you don't mind but I've done a workshop.

Barry

Great cityscape, I like this format as it is, it works well in my opinion.
Pretty nocturnal scene, I like the city lights at night.
Smart work.

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 776 W: 26 N: 808] (9426)
  • [2016-08-31 22:13]

Hi Barry,
Good to see the city again (we lived there from (1974-86)
I agree with Bob and I think his WS eliminates a lot of empty space, also the tower has a slight lean to the right
Cheers
Jack

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  • periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 120 W: 44 N: 32] (2173)
  • [2016-09-02 23:30]

Hi Barry
I like the shades close to the horizon, however I think that the image needs a bit more of clearness.

TFS & regards

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