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Sweets


Sweets
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Copyright: Mohd Tabrez Alam (doctabrez) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 5 N: 7] (433)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-26
Categories: Event
Camera: Canon EOS 350 D, Canon 18-55 mm EF-S
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-27 8:16
Viewed: 1427
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Children returning frm home with sweets distribited at school on the occasion of Republic Day!
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A cute shot - although I think it could be improved.

This looks to me like a snapshot, a quick photograph as they were passing by without much consideration of POV, background, etc.

In addition to the looking-down point of view (it would be more powerful, to me, if you were at their eye level for this shot) there is a conflict between the two faces for the same small area of the photograph. A different angle - perhaps from in front of them, would allow better separation of their faces. It would also allow you to avoid having that quarter-of-a-door at the upper right of the frame.

It might also pay to have used a longer focal length and perhaps concentrate only on their faces and paper plates - only showing what you need to show.

Just some thoughts!
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