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Copyright: Neeraj Pradhan (niraj) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 181 W: 3 N: 96] (2076)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D200.
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-25 21:54
Viewed: 1320
Points: 18
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I am going to post some shots of the river and water in the next few weeks, i need some serious comments and critiques. i am turning to my friends in the TL for this.

early morning shot in the river close by, is the shot any good. the trick is to get the right composition i think and it appeals to all. I am not sure this is the right one, just trying. thanks for looking, bye.

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To mortcdz: Thanks Markniraj 1 10-26 22:32
To linus: Thanks Sunilniraj 1 10-26 22:31
To gerbilratz: Thanks Howardniraj 1 10-26 22:30
To jamfest: thanks Davidniraj 1 10-26 22:29
To rewshearer: thanks Rewniraj 1 10-26 22:28
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Well done...Congratulations

I like it. I find the diagonal of the rocks from the upper left across to the upper-right-third works well, allowing the eye to travel across and down.

The exposure is well managed with appropriate softening of the flowing water. Nice solid frame.


Very nice, very artistic.

Excellent exposure, giving a nice blur to the water while still maintaining detail.

Well composed with good use of diagonal lines. Excellent B&W conversion.


I like this a lot, very good "atmosphere" to the water,very good composition, only crit would be to be able to see more of it!!.. this is good enough not to have to frame it... be proud of this and give us a full sized image!!!

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1797 W: 13 N: 1442] (15482)
  • [2008-10-26 7:42]
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Hi Neeraj,
Lovely image. Good idea to have a long exposure to get the water flow right. Good composition, may be a bit more sharpness and details of the rocks might have helped.

A good composition and very nice tonal range throughout the picture. Not having any sharp detail in the immediate foreground does allow the eye to move throughout the frame and doesn't make the viewer settle on one particular aspect - which I supposed mirrors the movement of the water.
Thanks for sharing

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 733 W: 61 N: 1257] (7137)
  • [2008-10-27 14:33]

Neeraj hi
I think it is lovely. The movement with long exposure has really turned it into a painting rather than a capture. I really like it
My compliments

i'll hope that in a few month i can take teh same...
very beautifull job!

nice way to get close to nature. rushing of water well captured. nice frame. T>Y. Janos

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