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Copyright: Danielle Dupre (ddupre2) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 457 W: 61 N: 215] (8136)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-12-31
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: the contry of Smiless : South India
Theme(s): People Doing What People Do [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-02-09 1:17
Viewed: 1642
Points: 27
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
... in Puducherry... walk in the evening...

not very good picture for technical but I should wish to share with you, only a moment, contrast of colors and between childs and adults, girl and boy...

to follow...

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To ErikSven: j'ai hésité...ddupre2 1 02-09 04:44
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Hi Danielle
What a wonderful capture!
The colored young lady and the black womans in BG!

Bonjour Danielle.

J’aime beaucoup ce genre d’image instantanée prise à la volée.
Une image qui présente un bon intérêt malgré certains petits défauts, mais l’instant vaut plus que le côté technique.

Une image forte, Danielle, tant sur le plan photographique (le rouge et le noir ;o)) que sur le plan de l'ambiance qu'elle dégage (rendu presque palpable de la culture dans cette partie du monde). Très bien observé donc!
Cela dit, je crois que ta photo gagnerait encore en force si tu la rognais sur la gauche, enlevant entièrement le petit garçon pour ne garder que la fille, se détachant des dos noirs.
Juste une idée, que je ne t'oblige pas à partager ;o)
Merci du partage & amicalement,

Bonjour Danielle

Je partage l'avis d'Urs une image forte parce qu'instantanée et quel contraste de tous points !

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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 265 W: 25 N: 207] (2856)
  • [2010-02-09 9:17]

good composition Dupre... cropping the other kid maybe would made the photo better... but still a good composition.. I like the unawareness of the kid and the ladies, TFS

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-02-09 16:49]

an impressive scene,
the situation looks queer and strange,,,
mysterious black people make metaphoric stage,
and red girl and blue boy show me magic performance on it,
it is seashore, partial blue but almost invisible imaginative sea is beyond black screen,

very attractive and beautiful picture, thank you,

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2010-02-10 0:47]

Bonjour Danielle,
très intéressant que l'image que vous l'avez posté.
Belle présentation, idée intéressante que vous avez joué.
Excellent POV, félicitations.
Salutations amicales,

Ciao Danielle

No doubt it is an unusual picture,
are different, exotic and little to see.
A small child stands out with your clothes
colorful dresses of the ladies in the adult.
Nice effects!


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  • rlrad Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 142 W: 8 N: 375] (1374)
  • [2010-02-10 10:17]

Hi Danielle,

I like this one better than your most recent, and I think it works well with the boy in the shot. The technical part of it is very much secondary as far as I am concerned. I like the contrast of the girl's red clothes against the black burkas and her bored look. This is a nice image, great commentary on Asian culture.

Thanks for sharing!

Hello Danielle,
very mysterious and very friendly and open on the other side.
Regards Caesar

Hello D Dupre,
this is great observation and nice composition...
best wishes...
have a nice week end..

Hola Danielle
Fantastica imagen con un gran contraste de color estre las mujeres y la niña ,muy bien captado el momento , buen encuadre luz y nitidez , una composicion muy agradable , felicidades
Buen trabajo
un saludo

Belle photo qui en dit long; le contraste noir-rouge est excellent. Je partage l'avis d'Erik pour le cadrage.

Bonsoir Danielle,
Grande contraste entre adultes et enfants, et le contraste de la couleur. Je me demande comment les enfants reconnaissent leur mère. Gorgeous photo.

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