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Rainy Day Tokyo


Rainy Day Tokyo
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Copyright: john greene (elan2004) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 16 W: 0 N: 99] (1452)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-04-25
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2013-12-02 1:00
Viewed: 1085
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken through a window of the Price Hotel in Shinjuku, Tokyo.
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To pushpinder: excellent workshopelan2004 2 12-03 05:51
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Hi John

Very colourful wih good dynamic, diagonal lines running through the scene.
Perhaps the contrast or saturation could have beein increased, but still a good shot.

Beautiful picture...just needed some fine tuning which I have done in the workshop.

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  • swerM Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 40 W: 0 N: 32] (403)
  • [2013-12-02 8:04]

Hi John
Interesting show of colourful umbrellas here. I agree with others, could have done some ppw.

Hello John, an excellent observation of a colourful and graphic real-life scene.
Tfs, regards Jean.

Ciao John, greatPOV for a fascinating composition, beautiful graphic, excellent clarity, splendid light and wonderful colors, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio

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  • periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 44 N: 32] (2229)
  • [2013-12-03 14:49]

Hi John
Interesting display of people on the pedestrian lane. Colorful scene seen from an outstanding viewpoint.

Pedro

although conrast is bit low, but is compensate by the vibrant colours umbrellas.
top left red bend on ground make a good balance overall.

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