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kampung girl

kampung girl
Photo Information
Copyright: andee foo (andeerichard) (63)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-27
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/250 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-22 6:40
Viewed: 1487
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
taken during my friend wedding day... i like the position how the door and slipper plus a beautiful girl and flower... just like village girls..
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To Rabani: thanks for tour comment.andeerichard 1 09-23 07:38
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Hi Andee,
You have a pretty subject here but you need to be more in command of the scene. First, you need to make her look at you. Here, she is looking at someone else even though her body is facing you. It's the eyes that "talk" or communicate.

Second, she is standing by the doorway and it helps in framing her. The problem with most doorways in Sabah is, you would see all assortment of tainted slippers and worn out shoes parking in front of it. Try not to include them in your shots ok.

Look around your viewfinder and see whether there's anything that might be distracting and not nice, before you release the shutter.

Have fun learning and experimenting Andee.

This beautiful photo is well composed and nicely presented.
Notes are very interesting.
Thanks for showing this to us.

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