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Cai is five #2


Cai is five #2
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Copyright: Jusni Nasirun (jusninasirun) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1142 W: 93 N: 1946] (10338)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-26
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm 1:1.8
Exposure: f/1.8, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-27 0:57
Viewed: 1493
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi friends in TL,

Here is another post of my son Cairiel celebrating his 5th borthday.

Thanks for viewing!


EXIF Data
Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D80
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
Exposure Time: 10/1600 sec
F-Stop: f/1.8
ISO Speed Ratings: 100
Focal Length: 50 mm
Date Taken: 2009-01-26 16:00
Metering Mode: Pattern
File Size: 220 kb
jusni nasirun 2009

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Hi Jusni!

Another lovable shot. Blurred area at the model - your son is interesting to me. And of course, happy birthday! :-)

Have a nice day!
David

Hi Jusni,
what a lovely son you have;)
i wish him all the greetings,
happy birthday Cairiel;):)
arm regards,
Taner

Hi Jusni

Well ... is it a photo of your son really? Or is it a photo of his balloon?

Traditionally, a portrait should be clear on the subject's eyes; in this shot, the clearest object is the balloon, and that is where the viewer's attention feels the most comfortable.

In terms of light, composition, and background bokeh, as well as your chosen tilt, this is nice. In terms of being a photograph of your son, it's debatable whether it works or not.

From my point of view, I applaud the experimentation and unusual idea.

Rew

Hi My dear friend Jusni, another great shot of our handome boy, cairel.
Take care!
Cheers,
Bayram

aku rasa pic bro kelmarin of your son are much better dari yg ne.. tu aku pya opinion ja.. apa pon masih cantik untuk di lihat.. tfs..

regards, terry

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2009-01-28 2:32]

hello Jusni

Looks like you are treading through a phase of life that some of us have already gone through. Depending on his line to the throne, 5 is still a tender age that needs moulding. For the photo, I would say the focus is out and perhaps the boy is moving around too quick for the composition and focus? You may have to re-shoot if it is a portrait that is worth a good quality. Or else the boy may complain :)

tfs, bill

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