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Copyright: Jusni Nasirun (jusninasirun) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1142 W: 93 N: 1946] (10338)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-02-16
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikkor 18-55mm AF-S DX f3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/200 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-25 0:55
Viewed: 1336
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi friends in TL,

Shot this in b+w with D80 as commander on SB800.

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To boreocypriensis: D80jusninasirun 1 02-26 07:05
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This is really nice Picture
I like the sharpness and Colors alot

Thanks for sharing


Very unusual shot in terms of its subject, its POV, even its lighting. Quite random construction, I realise you put the camera in strong part of the frame but the shopping bag and the box and other objects along the bottom of the shot are every bit as dominant here, and the vague underlit background also draws attention.

The fact that the camera, despite being the focus of attention, has its camera strap half outside the shot, is also a slight issue.

I don't quite understand it - but credit to you friend for having the guts and initiative to try something outside of the tried-and-true.


Hi Jusni,wonderful pov. i buy a D-80 newlyhope i could use it succesfuly:)


  • Great 
  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 733 W: 61 N: 1257] (7137)
  • [2009-02-25 23:11]

Nice shot Jusni

The b/w goes fine wth the old model


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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 624 W: 0 N: 993] (4864)
  • [2009-03-15 6:51]

Salam Jusni,
Wow....youre going abstract now.
Nice composition and the meaning is still LEFT to you. : )


Hellow Jusni,
Nice use of strong foreground light against the low but well defined BG light.

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