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Copyright: Jusni Nasirun (jusninasirun) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1142 W: 93 N: 1946] (10338)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-11-23
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D80
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/1250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-12-01 0:47
Viewed: 2589
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello friends in TL,

My children like to spend some time here about three times a week in the evening.

Thanks for viewing!
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Hello Jusni!
Fine toy, fine colours, superb lightness and brightness. Good point of view. Excellent background. Simply good cut. Sophisticated effect. Fine work, very funny work.
Let the children play... Do You remember song by Carlos Santana?
Well done!

  • Great 
  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-12-01 3:09]

Hi Jusni,
A nice minimal composition and a colorful one!
A great detail of this top of a swing adorned with wonderful noon lighting. Perfect clarity and a neat presentation.
A very attentive effort to keep to the thirds!
Well done, my friend.

Francis Xavier

Another excellent shot Jusni , this is so different from your usual flora/fauna posts yet at the same time you show us a very current sign of our daily life , that of parents like you taking their children to the playground to amuse them safely . A very modern piece of structure here just like we see them around here too , once more as in your 'lonely dove' image you have created a well balanced presentation by placing your subject off-center , the clear blue sky filling up all of the negative space around it, astutely well constructed production my friend,
I like it,

Hi Jusni.
A beautiful neat work with vivid contrast colors where you present your kids favorite play stuff,well captured and beauitful presentation.
Best Wishes

ExceLLent and clever PoV !
Beautiful geometry and use of colors.
Perfect minimalist work. Less is more.

  • Teresat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3410 W: 96 N: 3821] (15934)
  • [2010-12-02 16:44]

olá jusni
I had no clue this photo was yours.
Very well seen with a great play of shapes and colors.

Your children know well what they like ..
um abraço

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