Walk on By
|Copyright: dave banfield (davejb) (70)|
|Date Taken: 2013-07-16|
|Categories: Daily Life|
|Exposure: f/22, 1/350 seconds|
|More Photo Info: [view]|
|Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop|
|Date Submitted: 2015-02-11 7:41|
|[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note|
|Just leaving area when I took one last look back and caught this shot, more or less. Okay, less. It looked empty with just the woman so added the monks. Okay?|
this is another great picture and I have nothing but admiration for it. My only comment is that perhaps the clouds are a little blue.
I hope you don't mind, but I've done a workshop to see if I could bring out more texture in the wood, because I thought it was a little pale. I think I failed.
Beautiful colors in this unique daily life composition. The light are shadows are really wonderful.
- [2015-02-11 18:56]
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Is it OK? Yes, very much so. The composition is excellent with the woman in exactly the right position and the monk walking towards the vanishing point in the distance. It is a thought-evoking image and, to my mind, that is one of the main objectives of photography. Well done.
PS: You obviously could do some more work on this image such as finding the best balance between brightness and contrast, and adjusting the slight tilt, but that is fine-tuning to the preference of the artist.
Hello Dave! Wonderful shot. Amazing woman. Superb monk. Interesting wooden pier. Good composition. Great effect. Regards!