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Storm coming now!

Storm coming now!
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Copyright: gloria williams (touristdidi) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 821 W: 0 N: 1324] (6497)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-04
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-21 7:55
Viewed: 2443
Points: 20
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Fewa Lake in the monsoon, a storm can suddenly arise, with little warning. The monsoon was early this year. Farmers count on everything happening at the correct time. Rice needs the water in the feilds at a certain stage, and harvest to be at a dry time.

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I love to be out on the lake and see the rain storm moving toward me. I like the way you captured the rain just over the first hill. The light (or lack thereof) from the sun darkens the colors up and it looks very nice.

Storm is realy coming down the mountain. Realistic. I like this lake and boat, good colors.
Jean Michel

Composição para cartão postal!

Fewa Lake, that is in Pokhara, also Nepal, isn't it? You seem to have an adventurous life! I love the fog (I suppose its rain) on the mountain. Tell us more in new photos...

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  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 110 N: 849] (4090)
  • [2004-10-21 12:14]

Wow, this is really terrific. A pity you didn't get a bit more of the blue boat in. The boats really add colour and depth. And I detect rainbows in the mist rolling in. I would maybe have cropped on the right to avoid that pier and give the impression of an open sea that way.

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 420 N: 1093] (6670)
  • [2004-10-21 15:16]

Excellent composition with very moody colors...like it very much, the only thing i would think about is cropping the brick wall on the left and the blue boot.nevertheless this is a great shot !!

Belle composition avec une ambiance très particulière. Beau contraste entre la partie noire et blanc et celle en couleur. Très bien fait.
Bye, Jacques

I really enjoy how this is composed... very good colors as well.

Nicely done.

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  • nahal Silver Star Critiquer [C: 29 W: 3 N: 3] (84)
  • [2005-05-01 16:35]

Wow... what a lovely place !!
thanks for sharing .

Hello Gloria,
Attractive emphasis on the wooden boats, one blue and one yellow make a fine colour combo!
And capure of the rain is impressive, I can actually SEE this is heavy downpour...
Pablo -

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