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Beggar Boy


Beggar Boy
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Copyright: dave banfield (davejb) (70)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2014-05-06
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/9.5, 1/350 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-11-08 7:12
Viewed: 1567
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken while walking round Kathmandu, Nepal.
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Hi Dave

Please understand that this is my opinion as an amateur only, and many people's opinion may differ.

I think this is the type of image that you either like or dislike. I'm afraid I'm not that keen. Your note is not very descriptive so I can only comment on what I see. The image looks very over worked and the post at the top of the boy's head is very distracting.
I do like the composition and the people's feet in the scene though.

Hi Dave,
I quite like the HDR effect and definition of the child. A sad fact of life is depicted. Personally I might have done a lower angle but a great documentary.
erwin...

One of the great message by image OF TL!
It is so painful portrait!? it is about time to learn how to provide shelter-food-safety
for the children of our planet "our home"!
Dear David a very stunning work BY-IMAGE
BRAVO DAVE BANFIELD

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  • jods Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 101] (578)
  • [2016-11-09 9:06]

Bonjour Dave,

Pour moi, je suis de l'avis de Marine, votre photo montre l'insoutenable, surtout lorsque l'on est père de famille comme moi, votre message est fort et on ne devrait plus voir ça à notre époque mais c'est utopique! Sinon, j'aime beaucoup le rendu B&W et le cadrage de votre photo, l'enfant est au centre, c'est lui la priorité, j'aime aussi voir qu'autour de lui des grandes personnes font leur vie mais ne font rien, le fait de voir simplement leurs pieds coupés augmente ce sentiment de "Laissé-pour-compte".
Félicitations, c'est une belle photo à crever le coeur!
Joseph

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