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Copyright: Jamshaid Ahmed (zarish) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 50 W: 35 N: 23] (314)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-05-19
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon Powershot SX120IS
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-05-23 23:44
Viewed: 1895
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Malang baba listening a visitor (not shown here), at Khari Shareef, Mirpur, Azad Kashmir, Pakistan.
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HI Jamshald..nice shot...perfect light and skin tones...


bonjour jamshaid

super baba cool il n a pas d age belle photo

bonne journee

AOA Jamshaid,
A nice portrait shot of this old man with deep thought which shows how deeply he is connected to what he is listening,nice framing with good light and beautiful details,well done my friend for such a presentation.

Best Wishes

Bonjour Jamshaid
Beau portrait de vieillard, semble un sage, un emite ou un prophète.Le visage buriné , la longue barbe et le regard intense vont dans ce sens ; portarait plein de naturel , l'arriere plan de colonnes ajoute au sérieux du personnage

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  • werdir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1416 W: 147 N: 2654] (11957)
  • [2010-05-31 14:35]

Hi Jamshaid,

A very good portrait of this elderly gentleman. Focus and exposure on your subject are perfect, and he appears very intent in what he is doing. I don't do many portraits, but I think it might be a good idea to crop a small bit from the bottom, just above his sleeve opening, right at the bottom of his beaded neck attire. Definitely an interesting subject.

Best regards,

hola Jamshaid

un rostro hermoso, vivo retrato de la experiencia un semblante de orgullo te felicito

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  • Athila Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 286 N: 822] (4030)
  • [2010-06-01 21:02]

Bonsoir Jamshaid,

Nice portrait. Good soft light rendering lots of details all over. Pose and expression look very natural. Nice work and TFS.


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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-06-02 22:19]

dear Jamshaid,
a beautiful portrait shot of the old man with severe face,
his posture and eyes are very nice,
and his ambience and feeling are well captured and expressed,
thank you for your nice picture,

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