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What?
Photo Information
Copyright: Jeremy Villasis (jaeWALK) (25)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-18
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 400D Rebel XTi
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-03-20 0:51
Viewed: 2051
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I was just clicking away while Jonah was talking to a friend. I think this came up OK.
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model is preety indeed.
good in placing the subject kaya lang kabayan sana dimo cropped ang arm IMHO.
but i like your compo
cheers and happy shooting
Ed

Cute title! Reminds me of someone who was being stared at and thought something was wrong: "what?". Hehe, very good capture of her facial expression, and Jonah's dynamic look and character, as well as the casual and nonchalant pose contrast well with the plain, bleak blue wall behind her. Excellent range of textures on the wall, in her hair, and the skin. Great lighting to show subtle form and nice soft shadow behind Jonah. I would perhaps up the contrast just a tiny bit since the colors look slightly washed-out. But that could just be me. Excellent simple shot and nice portrait. Thanks for sharing!
-Lara

Hi Jeremy
Yep for a spontaneous shot it worked really well. Great placement of your subject in the frame, excellent use of available light, good sharpness and colours.
Nice!
Rew

great simple expression captured and nicely composed! magaling! WS ako, nothing's wrong with your post, nag experiment lang ako...tfs

jowhite

This came up pretty nice.
Beautiful model BTW.
Good and clean background.

Nice and funny face expression you've captured.
I would think how it would look if you would have captured the whole of the right arm.


Well done
Tom

Really nice, Jeremy!
This is a good capture in the right moment.

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