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Copyright: Tonsy Domiquil (tonsy) (15)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2010-05-23
Categories: Experimental
Camera: CANON EOS REBEL XS 1000D
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/20 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-07-14 21:44
Viewed: 1872
Points: 2
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I think the image/idea has potential but the most eye-catching feature is the bright watermark. It's distracting and pointless, not sure what your thinking is. Also, again, there's no photographer's note and most Treklensers seem to like them - and many won't critique a shot without one.

For me, the exposure/contrast are not quite right - there's a curved "something" in front of the left window and I find myself curious about knowing what it is and seeing some definition there. Also, the shot seems too "smooth" given the subject matter and an element of noise may help.

Hello Tonsy

In like the heavy contrast in this image. Nice work

jimmy

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