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Just Before She Sleeps


Just Before She Sleeps
Photo Information
Copyright: Robert Ramos (eyeglassleech) (38)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D 40, 18 - 55 mm EF-S 3.5:5.6, 52 mm UV
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-21 4:59
Viewed: 1585
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is my wife...this shot is the first portrait i took when i got my dslr last february...comments are well encouraged...thanks
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Hello:

You are right about that. The first pic should have been the Commander in Chief Lol.

Note the clutter on the lower left areas. Taking the attention from the main subject.

The subject also need more lighting. The hair details is being eaten by the background.

Hope this helps~

Welcome to TL!

Eman.

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