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Photo Information
Copyright: Robert Ramos (eyeglassleech) (38)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D 40, 18 - 55 mm EF-S 3.5:5.6, 52 mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-23 8:12
Viewed: 1657
Points: 4
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A Mother's Day Gift to all..
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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2841 W: 398 N: 3076] (34114)
  • [2009-05-23 11:36]

Merhaba dear Robert...
What a nice work ...
great angle
a beautiful black-and-white images,
good sharpness and light

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 62 N: 749] (5437)
  • [2009-05-24 21:47]
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A good shot of a mother and child. You have good tonal values and the photo is focused on the child. Next time you do another mother and child shot, make sure you pay attention to the distance between the mother and the child. On this photo the space between them is so wide it occupies almost one third of the framed space. That is why you loose the impact. The huge center space is becomes the weak point in the composition.

Have a nice day,

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