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Copyright: Arman Taylo (psyce) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 265 W: 25 N: 207] (2856)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-11-23
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/4.6, 1/120 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-12-18 10:04
Viewed: 2250
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my friend Nover. While talking to her I was at the same time taking snaps of her... she was not in the mood that day... but thanks to her she still allowed me to photograph her.
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I really have to think about this one mate. It would be good to know what you wanted to achieve with this - because as much as she's a pretty model, your treatment of the shot is not flattering - the colours and the treatment of details, especially her eyes, makes them look surreal.

I suspect you were too close for the focal length, also, as there is some distortion of her face it seems.

Kudos for experimenting - always do it!
Rew

Ciao Arman, fascinating portrait of this lovely girl with splendid eyes, wonderful expression, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Parang nasobrahan ng konti ang timpla ng pp work sa mata (masyadong makintab) at mukha (sobrang kinis). Otherwise, an exquisite work. Ingatz...

HI Arman..nice shot...very surreal...good work.

Roger

I like this shot Arman - an unusual portrait.. There is distortion due to the focal length but I think it's effective here.. The monotone is effective too..

DAVid

ayuz ganda ng PP bro! medyo dumilim lang ng konti sa monitor ko (or baka dahil lang sa calibration ng monitor ko)...nways magaling at maganda ang execution..

regards,
alex

Interesante fotografia, el postproceso, los ojos, el rostro, la piel y el ambiente, la mirada. Toda una imagen extraña, un retrato interesante :)

Wow-nice shot Arman! Those eyes.....Very sharp portrait with great use of vignette effect. TFS!

Dilshan

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2010-01-07 0:09]

I think the accent in the picture is the eyes,they look fantastique.


jan

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