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island of lost souls


island of lost souls
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Copyright: Danilo Martinez (cunejo200) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2556 W: 83 N: 4926] (20188)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2010-04-24
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D300, Nikkor 18-200 1:3.5-5.6 ED DX
Exposure: f/8, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-07-19 3:50
Viewed: 2740
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I'm like an island,
i'm like a lost soul;
cut off from the rest of the world.
Walking the same corridors,
stalking the same cold shining floors;
in search of the place i will stay.
I'm like an island,
i'm like a lost soul;
cut off from the rest of the world.....
island of lost souls.
island of lost souls.
island of lost souls.
island of lost souls.
Placed on the same staircases,
faced with the same choice of steps
and paces;
in search of the place i will stay;
island of lost souls.
island of lost souls.
island of lost souls.

~lyrics by Fitzgerald Patrik

My cam was set on b&w mode. No cropping and pp work save for resizing.

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Hello Danilo

It's nice your note is a poem? beautiful.
I like this photo b&w, with a soul.
Looks like time has stopped, it is a quiet moment, perfectly balanced with good contrast.
Clever pov and use of light. So poetic work.
Cheers

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-07-19 4:09]

Hi Danilo!
Lovely picture....the B/W gives a great, suggestive atmosphere to the scene.
The capture is excellent and the shades of the gray divide perfectly the photo in three parts!!
The composition is excellent.
Have a nice week.
ciao! vanda

Olá Danilo,
Great post. Lucky your cam was set on BW mode.
Beautiful and romantic image.
Great poem.
Respects,
R.

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-07-19 6:46]

Hello,

Fantastiqeu cpatage, quel découpage en ombre chinosie des personnages et des éléments, avec des reflets, une ambiance magique, ce brillant sur l'eau, sueprbe.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • Teresat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3410 W: 96 N: 3821] (15934)
  • [2010-07-19 11:18]

Bom dia Danilo
You love so much colors it was a surprise to see this good B/W. Good sharpness and I like the light of the composition. You catch a realy beautiful moment and you have choose and good title and poem. It is touching.
Um abraço dear danilo
Teresa

Good Morning Danilo,

Such an unusual shot for you, b&w, that is.
It creates a lovely mood of tranquility and I think the lack of colour intensifies this feeling.
I just love how the water has two different textures, the lighter one making a great contrast with the silhouetted boys and the smoother one allowing the reflections to show.

I think I would have cloned out the f/g head which, for me, does distract a little from the subject.

Have a lovely day,
Bev :-)

Thank you so much for sharing a beautiful B&W photo, Danilo.
I am wondering if you crop the FG a little bit, what will the photo look like.
Best regards
HienVy

Hi Danilo
Impressive B&W capture and mood
Perfect reflections and silhouettes
Have a nice days
Burak

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2010-07-20 23:06]

Hi Danilo,
beautiful work with beautiful poem.I liked silhuettes and color tones so much.TFS.Necla.

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6102 W: 174 N: 1935] (7534)
  • [2010-07-21 13:35]

Ciao Danilo


Great shot, note, music!
Your island is beautiful souls and the small boat
takes two more souls to the island. A quiet moment
stop here all the serene and B & W is great!
Sharpness and clarity are very well is look at.
Composition and presentation are very well.

Best regards,

Sergio

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-07-21 21:55]

dear Danilo,
very atmospheric picture of still and calm scene,
beautiful B&W space and lone boat in it looks so quiet and solitude,
the boys look watching something precious on rippled water,
but they don't know it surely...
thank you for your wonderful shot,
Akihisa

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