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Copyright: cris go (crisgotiny) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 541 W: 0 N: 327] (3826)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-11-07
Categories: Food
Camera: Nikon, 18-55 f/3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/8, 1/80 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-11-08 6:51
Viewed: 1866
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I try capturing kiwi...sliced and arrange this way...hmmm hope not a bad presentation

I am trying to capture again nice photographs

thanks for dropping by

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Hello Cris,

nice arrangement of the kiwi slices.. makes for a strong composition. Great lighting and shadows against the white background as well. My only complaints would be the lack of sharpness and the distracting date in the corner.

Hello Cris,

A strong composition with the kiwi slices contyrasting well with the whole kiwi fruit and the white b/g.
There is room for a little more sharpness on the f/g fruit.

My warm regards,
Bev :-)

Nice shot bro..I love the presentation.
For me, the sharpness is just right..My only builds is that try next time to reduce the direct lighting and use more of the bounce flash since you have a white background, to improve more on the contrast...my 2 cents

Hello Cris,

So long that I have not seen your photos.
What I like is the presentation of the kiwi, like a flower.
Very nice lighting too and details.
Refreshing and tasty.
Good job Cris

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