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Michelle


Michelle
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Copyright: jovie naval (jovienaval) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 19 N: 76] (2830)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-07-30
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D40X, Sigma 70-300 AF f/4.0-5.6DG Macro
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-08-03 10:07
Viewed: 2042
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
1st portraiture workshop with officemate as our model, tyvm.
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Your model is really beautiful and she has a charming look but IMHO the portrait lacks certain sharpness and focusing, Jovie!

When looking at her eyes and ear-pendants, one can see that the focus is not that spot-on as it meant to be. Other facial features get a soft-look too. Hope you don't mind my personal views on this shot.

As far as the POV is concerned it is well done along with colors.
The contrast to the BG is well kept too.

Thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
Paras

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