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river in the city


river in the city
Photo Information
Copyright: BK koh (wenqing) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1494 W: 102 N: 2012] (11873)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-02-23
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation, Architecture
Camera: Mamiya RB 67 Pro-SD, Mamiya-Sekor 50mm f/4.5, Fuji Pro 160S
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-25 7:20
Viewed: 2332
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
another view of the Singapore river with its river taxis in the heart of the city

shot with Mamiya RB67
50mm lens
fuji 160C color film
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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 796 W: 48 N: 1708] (11179)
  • [2008-02-25 9:20]

ciao bk...grande lavoro...antico e moderno insieme...bell accoppiata..strana messa a fuoco che rende la composizione molto originale...complimenti...
lele

I'm lovin the DOF in this Koh! Really nice focus and your film shots have such a nice tone to them! Nice sharpness and details!
B-)
Linda

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1350 W: 102 N: 1081] (9125)
  • [2008-02-25 11:33]

Hi BK, I like to see this part of Singapore and the emphasis on the boats is a big bonus. The building in the background seems slightly splayed out here, in mine they are often splayed in slightly, maybe the various lens. The POV looking along the rail is good as it makes me feel like i am there alongside you. TFS. Murray.

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3311 W: 1066 N: 5188] (23042)
  • [2008-02-25 12:37]
  • [+]

I Koh,
I am a little confused about this photo. I don't have much technical expertises. So, please don't mind about my interrogations, here! It is not a negative criticism. I just want to understand your mind about this photo for improve mines.
First, your POV is very nice giving a great perspective at this place. But, I don't understand about the light blur on it. Is it a real rendered foggy mood or a voluntary effect with your lens for an artistic presentation? At the first sight, I believed that a little more sharpness or more neutral colors could give a more clear look at the FG. Also, the buildings in BG are distorted, surely cause of the wide angle. Why didn't you correct it with PS for a better looking at this beautiful view?
Best regard! Annie

  • Great 
  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1540 W: 114 N: 2985] (16653)
  • [2008-02-26 2:40]

Interest shot BK, I like your DOF here, really nice, 50mm lens is really kool! I like it, I like the composition and pov here too, :D well done!

Cheers,
Sweety

Hi BK,
I like the POV - though I feel the image could have been sharper.

Best regards, Daniel

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