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Copyright: Jean Phavin (Phavin) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 54 W: 0 N: 60] (393)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Leica D Lux 3
Exposure: f/4, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-03 21:14
Viewed: 1902
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
While the photographer was doing the interior shoot at my friend's suburb house, I was on the other side of the house and saw him through the small red wood window. So I tried to frame him using the small window and exposed through it. I thought it'd be a nice idea to put the photographer into the frame :)

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Hello Jean! Interesting window in window. Good POV. Perfect composition. Original picture. Good luck!

bien cadrée,belle couleur, bon POV, bonne profondeur de champ...
c'est tres bien fait, j'aime beaucoup...

Nice job. Good placement of the window, good use of negative space - and I really like the way the eye is drawn through the frame into one tiny area of the photograph to see the photographer in action.

Very nice composition with great graphic effect. Nice textures and colours and a very well balanced light. Well done !

Hi Jean, Creative POV. The framing of the window is perfect. TFS
Cheers, Pat.

Love this one....Texture, framing, lighting and color blends well...also nice work with the composition


Un cadre dans le cadre, bien vu
Bonne journée.

Nice composition and framing Jean... good texture on the wall.

Regards Mark :)

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2953 W: 139 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2009-06-05 2:20]

Hi Jean,
With a wise idea and with a great photographic skill you created an artistic presentation!
The frame you added to the window is fantastic helped with a nice shadow.
A good position of the window and the photographer and the sky are excellently exposed.
Great shot which deserves the whole merit.

Francis Xavier

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