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Sister


Sister
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Copyright: Luis Esteves (astroturtle) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 17 W: 19 N: 81] (875)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-09
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation, Friends/Family
Camera: Canon PowerShot SD800 IS
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Bahamas
Date Submitted: 2007-09-24 16:44
Viewed: 2864
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Shot of my little sister, Nicole. We were all on a bus going for some local food in the Bahamas.

PP: Levels adjustments to deepen contrast. Saturation boosted lightly.
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I'm sorry, Luis - but I don't think this is that good. It is "entitled" sister and you say it is a shot of your sister...but the main figure in the shot is blurred, we don't see much of her and her expression is hard to fathom. The blur may have worked if we, the viewer, were following her gaze out of the window - in effect, seeing what she was seeing. However, with this composition, i don't think it works, sorry.

hi Luis,
I like this photo very much and good POV and DOF, Idea and spontaneity to shot this moment are brilliant. we no need to get a focus on her face, because the point its not there,

the point is : You see someone was thinking of something and look out the windows.
a lot of thing that we can see out of windows and there is always much of hope.

this photo gave me the inspiration to create photo like this in the future.
tfs
Haldian

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