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Copyright: Michel Patenaude (mip158) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 10 W: 43 N: 22] (773)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon Rebel EOS 300D
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-03-16 7:49
Viewed: 2395
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sous un soleil de plomb vaut mieux se protéger, comme le fait cette cubaine.
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Hi Michel

Street scenes like this can be quite compelling - although in this case it doesn't quite have that 'wow' to it.

I wonder if it would've worked better from a more direct-on angle - so that the footpath was horizontal across the frame, and the woman with the umbrella was placed to the right, in the powerful 1/3rd position?

Plenty of potential - but in my humble opinion, didn't quite make it!


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