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Two lonely friends


Two lonely friends
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Copyright: Rodrigo Dada (rodrigodada) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 0] (357)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-07-28
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-06-23 16:04
Viewed: 3214
Points: 3
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in the highway
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To ErikSven: workshoprodrigodada 1 06-29 15:57
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Hello Rodrigo,
I like the mood of your photo, rendering very well the "friendship" between these two "lonely" friends. I just would have cropped a bit more the foreground, because it contains elements/nuances (roadside?) that I don't think are necessary (even a bit distracting). OK, the composition of your photo will not respect any more the rule of thirds, but I think a lower horizon will even enhance the feeling of space and loneliness... I'll try to post a WS to show you what I mean...
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Hello Rodrigo! Very good picture. Great! Best regards from Poland!

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