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White flower


White flower
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Copyright: Sira Suarez (isu) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 61 W: 0 N: 2] (497)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-18
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/7.0, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-29 15:20
Viewed: 2170
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2585 W: 1 N: 425] (10173)
  • [2007-08-29 19:48]

Hola Isu,
ya veo que se ha ido de viaje otra vez,
sensacional flor,
viaja mas que lolita pluma,
saludos

Hi Sira,

could have been a very nice shot, but there are some serious issues here: use of flash is killing for such shots. Flash horribly flattens the subject, especially when it's so close. The delicate petals with subtle texture become like they were made of hard paper... Another problem are unnacceptably strong reflecions around, on green leaves. Finally you oversharpened the shot which gave unnatural, white, thin line at the very edge of the petals.

Marek

Hi Sira,
Very nice macro and great shot.beautiful colors and details.well done.TFS.
Greetings.
H.Ayhan

Hello Isu

Splendid composition with very beautiful colours and lighting

Marina

merhaba dear sira
wonderful white flower.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Bellos colores los de esta preciosa flor.
Buen encuadre y estupenda la luz.
Saludos, JL.

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