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my distance

my distance
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Copyright: Aliaksandr Yafremau (Alfonso) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 8 N: 348] (3171)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-03-15
Categories: Daily Life, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Olympus SP-510 UZ
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): black/white life [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-04-01 2:33
Viewed: 3995
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Writing-books, diaries are unnecessary anybody,
You in an empty room once again thumb through dictionaries.
You one on a proscenium in unfamiliar show,
Time of premeire passed!..
You met and said goodbye a touch of a hand,
And anybody guessed who you is such.
Only a wind between roofs your unique visitor,
Somebody can here is?

It only your distance
And anybody should know
Where and as you hold the control
And where your pleasure, where your pain
And when shadows most bigger
On your wall
The peeled knees
The fly at a window
On last button you
You will clasp a coat
And will guess


Непатрэбныя нікому сшыткі, дзённікі,
Ты ў пустым пакоі зноў гартаеш слоўнікі.
ты адзін на авансцэне ў незнаёмым шоу,
час прэм'еры толькі што прайшоў!..
Ты сустрэў і развітаўся дотыкам рукі,
І ніхто не здагадаўся хто ты ёсць такі.
Толькі вецер паміж дахаў твой адзіны госць,
Можа хто-небудзь яшчэ тут ёсць?
Гэта толькі твая адлегласць
І ніхто не павінен ведаць
Дзе і як ты трымаеш кантроль
І дзе радасць твая, дзе твой боль
І калі даўжэюць цені
На тваёй сцяне
Абадраныя калені
Муха на вакне
На апошні гузік ты
Зашпіліш паліто
І не здагадаецца

P.S. on this photo - I.

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Bonjour Alphonso,
A nice presentation of you , and a good close-up portrait,,a well taken picture and I made a workshop of your picture...
Excellent done.

Hi Aliaksandr, what a fine looking man:) handsome...
TFS and cheers,

hi Alik,

nice self potrait of yourself.. :) i like what michel did to your potrait in the ws too.. you look relax here.. nice work.. tfs..

regards, terry

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2538 W: 70 N: 4788] (22221)
  • [2009-04-01 11:32]

Hi Alphonso...

It's really a beautiful shot and nice B&W portrait..!
Absolutely a great - I like the posse of You...
Fantastic details.
With my compliment,

ciao Aliaksandr..
selfportraits are my favorites..
great expression in this selfcapture..
there is an awareness idea and an introspective intention..
cool note.. your words are really great and intense!!
this is the kind of works i love..
ciao Marco

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