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city roofs
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Copyright: Aliaksandr Yafremau (Alfonso) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 8 N: 348] (3171)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-22
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Olympus SP-510 UZ
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-04-09 12:23
Viewed: 1515
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sam-nasam z hledziacym na pounac pakojem,
Sam-nasam i jasce napalam –
Adcuvaju, jak cisnie stol.
Chopic, dosyc, z mianie uzo davoli,
Chaj cas zahoic
moj nadakuclivy bol.
Mieniej, ci bolej, potym, ci zaraz,
Blizej, ci dalej..
My zrazumiejem pazniej.
Skocam pa dachach,
Abirajem biazludnyja vulicy…
Hublajem nadzieju, cakajem padziejau,
Sukajem, da kaho b prytulicca?
Zyc, jak maje byc,
Jak pulsujucy nerv.
Irviecca nadzieja na zmieny - niachaj!
Sto nam rabic?
Nie adkaza nichto.
Majem, sto majem, budzie, sto budzie. Niachaj!
Cas krocyc niaulouna, niauchilna, niaspynna,
Cas krocyc napierad,
My krocym pavoli i u insy bok.
Spazniajemsia, nibyta naumysna,
Dzie tolki mahcyma i dzie niemahcyma,
Ale zauzdy napieradzie na krok.
Ci heta strach, ci prosta viecier?
Niejak niajomka, nie chapaje cahosci u susviecie…

***

Confidentially with looking for the midnight room,
Confidentially and still half-and-half-
I feel, how presses a ceiling.
Will suffice, from me it is already enough,
Let time will heal
My annoying pain.
Less, whether it is more, then, whether now,
More close, whether far away...
We shall understand later
Скочим on roofs,
We select deserted streets...
We lose hope, we wait for events,
We search, to whom to cling?
TO LIVE, AS I TO BE,
AS THE PULSING NERVE.
The hope for changes - let is torn!
What to us to do?
Anybody will answer.
We have, that it is had, will be, that will be. Let!
Time walks imperceptibly, steadily, incessantly,
Time to walk forward,
We walk on the sly and in other party.
We hope, ostensibly deliberately,
Where only it is possible and where it is impossible,
But always forward on a step.
Whether it is fear, whether simply wind?
Somehow inconveniently, something suffices in the Universe...

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2538 W: 70 N: 4788] (22221)
  • [2009-04-09 19:51]

Hi Aliaksandr...

A great shot of this interesting place..!
Well done - fantastic details and colors.
Funny set up - nice colors of sky.
My compliment,
George

Hi MF Aliaksandr,
A different suject from you:)
Wonderful POV!
TFS and have a nice day!
Bayram

its different, Alik.. what do you really want to show here? the roofs or clouds? for me the building on the left are interesting to look at :) your poem sounded angry and feeling pain.. i hope you are not feeling like that.. cheer up will you.. :P:P

have a superb weekend, my friend.. stay safe.. hehe..

regards, terry

Привет,

мне нравится эта твоя фотография,
тут вроде как нечего особенного,
но все равно очень интересно на её смотреть :)
а в WS ты можешь увидеть мою версию :)

Марина

ciao Aliaksandr
nice and interesting pov!.. with good details about architecture of buildings!
thanks
ciao Marco

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