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Copyright: Vessy MS (Vessy) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 0 N: 14] (87)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-31
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.7, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-01 11:07
Viewed: 1807
Points: 4
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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2441 W: 250 N: 873] (8693)
  • [2008-11-01 11:45]

I like your concept to show 2 different eyes(different colors) from 2 different persons (in this case I think that they are womens'eyes) and shown on 2 different levels.The result is creative and artistic and makes me think a little bit of Picasso.Before I opened the thumbnail,I thought that the face was seperated by a tree with 2 branches (the eyebrows).Very interesting picture! TFS

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  • SooNy Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 12] (148)
  • [2008-11-02 13:10]

Snimkata e mnou qka... ;p oba4e... my advice is that when you change the brightness, contrast and so on... try to seperate it in layers... in order to change them differently like at this point the blue eye looks REALLY good, but the brown one i think you should work on it more...like to make it ligher.... :)

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