Interesting pose but a couple of problems. First, your models right eye is black, it needs some form of illumination from the left hand side. Secondly, there is a definite change in colour of the models skin on the left hand side of her face, the line runs down from the right hand side of her left eye, down her nose and across her mouth, this also needs correcting. Phil.
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Interesting pose but a couple of problems. First, your models right eye is black, it needs some form of illumination from the left hand side. Secondly, there is a definite change in colour of the models skin on the left hand side of her face, the line runs down from the right hand side of her left eye, down her nose and across her mouth, this also needs correcting. Phil.