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Sevlievo's Lyulin


Sevlievo's Lyulin
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Copyright: Mirella Dankova (mirmar) (33)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-07-19
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-07-19 14:32
Viewed: 1090
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The largest Sofia neighborhood, Lyulin is legendary; here, I shot a scene from the Southern residential neighborhood of Sevlievo, which I thought is the local equivalent of Lyulin. Did a lot of editing; let me know what you think (composition, DOF, the vignette effect etc.). Thanks.


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Bom dia Mirella,
A very descriptive scene almost well done were not following the failure, all due to the fact that you have not given to the image the attention it deserved (it's good "sleep" on the picture, as said Cartier Bresson):
1 The skyline is not sharp.
2 There are things blurry in the foreground, like leaves at the bottom.
3 The vignetting is sometimes a trick to hide deficiencies.
Sorry my approach done because I see in you much potential.
Welcome and produce more, only then you will have good results.

Hello Mirella
The entire scene is out of focus.
The goal of Trek Lens is learning about photography through our world, so you should, at least, show the exif data.
The other members also want to know what you think about their pictures.

All the best & thanks for sharing.
Pedro

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