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On Trial

On Trial
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Copyright: Michael Dolby (mrmike1935) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4654)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2020-06-01
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Leica V-Lux 4, Leica DC Vario-Elmarit 1:2.8/4.5-108ASPH, Digital
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2020-07-03 4:35
Viewed: 36
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A Lady Refugee selling the Homeless,s Newspaper, on our high Street. With our laws as they are she needs a job to get a Residents Permit, and a Residents permit to get a job. Unless you can get a Danish Citizen as a sponsor.

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To zto: On Trialmrmike1935 1 07-06 02:54
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  • Needs Improvement 
  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 24] (14)
  • [2020-07-05 15:56]
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This is better. We see the face. But I can also see she is not 'in' the picture. Next time. Walk up, talk to her. Tell her what story you want to tell. It is about here. She is in the picture but she is still not there. It is not her story. What is her story? Again there are distractions. The lady on the phone. It would have been better to isolate your subject from the surrounding. Do you want to picture things as you see them or do you want to tell a story?

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