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Copyright: Catherine Vincent (reggaetime) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 610 W: 138 N: 1019] (6525)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-07-09
Categories: Experimental, Macro
Camera: OLYMPUS SP 590UZ
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-11-26 2:19
Viewed: 1488
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Un essai photo dans un tout autre genre.
J'aimerais des conseils pour ce type d'image.
Je n'arrive pas à avoir une quelconque objectivité sur cette image...
Merci de m'éclaire.
Catherine


A photo essay in an entirely different kind.
I would like advice about that.
I can't have any objectivity on this picture ...
Thank you for enlighten me.
Catherine

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3627 W: 881 N: 2607] (21386)
  • [2010-11-26 3:37]

Very nice tones and textures

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-11-26 3:48]

Hi Catherine,
A successful experiment indeed! Nice composition with such geometry! Nice play with light and shadows. Sharpness is not that perfect!
I like the composition from this low POV!
An adequate white frame to compliment this dark presentation.
My regards,

Francis Xavier

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 0 N: 4177] (21534)
  • [2010-11-26 8:31]

Hello Catherine :)

Your very curious experiment and successful !
Perfect, interesting realization in beautiful colours and beautiful light.
Composition with splendid effect...congratulations!

With best wishes.
Barbara

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2010-11-26 9:12]

Hi Dear Catherine,
beautiful experimental work.Great detais and nice framing.TFS.Necla.

Super ! J'adore ce genre de cadrage même s'il n'est pas facile ! Ta diagonale est très bien engagée mais manque d'appui sur quelque chose de stable (un bord vertical, ou horizontal,...), comme par exemple en WS. J'aime aussi beaucoup la texture du bois et ses couleurs !
Amicalement
Jean

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2010-11-26 14:35]

Excellent detail capture, very sharp, with a great light and a strong graphic effect
Congrats Catherine
mb

This is a well seen capture where you show great textures and symmetry hidden within these wooden blocks, Catherine!
The warm tones of colors, the sharpness and POV are well chosen.
I like your diagonal approach to present them in an elegant white bordered frame.
Well done!

Have a nice weekend.

Merci,
Paras

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2010-11-26 15:52]

Hi Catherine,
Nice experiment - the grain on the wood and shape of the structure is a good mix of texture and form, excellent light and composition, the frame is a great finish to a superb shot. Best wishes
Bri

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-11-26 17:04]

dear Catherine,
a beautiful picture of wonderful piled woods,
the light and colors are nice to make fine space feeling,
especially this brown feels very warm and tender,
thank you for your excellent shot,
Akihisa

Hello Catherine! Wonderful edge. Amazing wooden details. Nice lightness and brightness. Good contrast, very good sharp, fine texture. Good capture and frame. Fine minimalistic effect. Well done!

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  • CMJC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 193 N: 124] (1191)
  • [2010-12-05 12:38]

j'aime les photos de matériaux et en particulier de bois qui a souvent des textures chaleureuses

je reviens sur ta photo après le WS de Jean (Reflex) qui en effet avec ce léger décallage donne quelque chose de plus à ta photo; ce petit rien qui lui manquait et que "objectivement" je ne savais trouver...
le sujet me plaisait mais...

est-ce un jeu de Kappla qui a eté patiné par le temps? en tout cas ta photo avait une potentiel grâce à ses fibres et aussi grâce à l'ambiance tranquille qui émane de cette superposition de "buchettes"

I like the close up shot you took here.
Well framed in white as well.
Nice point of view and hues of the wood, shadows and lights.
Superb job :)

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