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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2017-05
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2017-06-04 0:42
Viewed: 693
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Paris, view from the roof ... of the roofs

b&w conversion - f/13 - iso 100

I am experimenting with brushes, lightning, rain storm effect.

...
This result pleases me, but I know it's an awkward beginning, which can improve, I want to do better and I have doubts about this result.

An experiment.

1 - Too dark or not enough ?
2 - The effect brush also on the foreground ?
3 - More sky and less facade for the composition ?

So many doubts ... But here are the 3 main questions I ask myself.
Thanks if you've advices.


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Même avec son allure artificielle... cette scène a quelque chose de très intéressant !!!
J'aime le noir et blanc.
J'aime l'atmosphère qui s'en dégage.
J'aime toujours passer te dire bonjour comme une goutte de pluie sur un toit.
Soundsangels

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
  • [2017-06-05 19:35]

Hi Daisy
A dramatic image, excellent contrasts
Cheers
Jack

The Beautiful life is going on forever and ever.....in the rain and in the sun....
a great unforgettable image of the week well-done DAISY DAISY

Hi Daisy,
A very inspiring image with such tonal range,depth and clarity.The inclusion of the rain in the BG reminds me of the art created in some of the " Gotham " movies. It is a mass of urban jungle, I will get so lost in that.Really something different and too admire.
erwin...

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