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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2017-05
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2017-06-04 0:42
Viewed: 693
Points: 8
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Paris, view from the roof ... of the roofs

b&w conversion - f/13 - iso 100

I am experimenting with brushes, lightning, rain storm effect.

This result pleases me, but I know it's an awkward beginning, which can improve, I want to do better and I have doubts about this result.

An experiment.

1 - Too dark or not enough ?
2 - The effect brush also on the foreground ?
3 - More sky and less facade for the composition ?

So many doubts ... But here are the 3 main questions I ask myself.
Thanks if you've advices.

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Même avec son allure artificielle... cette scène a quelque chose de très intéressant !!!
J'aime le noir et blanc.
J'aime l'atmosphère qui s'en dégage.
J'aime toujours passer te dire bonjour comme une goutte de pluie sur un toit.

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
  • [2017-06-05 19:35]

Hi Daisy
A dramatic image, excellent contrasts

The Beautiful life is going on forever and ever.....in the rain and in the sun....
a great unforgettable image of the week well-done DAISY DAISY

Hi Daisy,
A very inspiring image with such tonal range,depth and clarity.The inclusion of the rain in the BG reminds me of the art created in some of the " Gotham " movies. It is a mass of urban jungle, I will get so lost in that.Really something different and too admire.

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