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sweet pumpkins
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Copyright: monique voorn schulz (movoschu) (74)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2012-10-14
Categories: Pets
Exposure: f/4, 1/50 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-07-30 5:48
Viewed: 1534
Points: 8
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sweet meal
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Hi Monique

Welcome to Trek Lens. Could you expand your note so it is in line with TLs terms of service.

A nice shot that has good detail, good focus and exposure. I'm not sure about leaving such a small area of colour works. But overall, a good first entry.

Hi Monique, I am guessing you have left the small patch of colour for where the goat has been tryingvto eat the pumpkin? Nice idea and quite a clear shot. Love those horns. Welcome to TL. Fiona

Monique well come to TL
indeed it is a nice looking sweet meal... also not a lot nutrition "better than nothing"
this is another great artwork by a beautiful first work well done MONIUE VOORN SCHULZ

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  • kency Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 1 N: 5] (681)
  • [2015-07-31 13:31]

Welcome Moniqeu,

what a cleaver B&W shot of the goat eating the pumpkin.
the colour makes the difference.

Monique

I don't like this choice of partial desaturation.

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