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Rusty brakes


Rusty brakes
Photo Information
Copyright: Ferenc Buchta (photofero) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 4] (248)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-08-30
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-10-27 4:28
Viewed: 1143
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
How many kilometers in this rusty irons...?
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To Andys: shadowphotofero 1 12-31 08:21
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Hi Ferenc

I think the photo needs a focal point, somewhere for the eye to rest. Its also a shame your shadow is included.

Maybe you could comment on other member's photos a little more?

Bom dia Ferenc,
Sorry you have wasted a good subject like that. In addition to Robert Smith criticized, I recommend cutting the area where your shadow appears and eliminate shiny objects that crialm overexposed areas.
rgds
R.

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  • Andys Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 118 W: 19 N: 72] (1119)
  • [2015-10-31 8:06]
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I totally agree with the other critiques re the composition Shame about the shadow. This said this was a really well spotted subject. Many photographers would have walked past this. It's a really interesting subject and nearly there composition wise just a few small tweaks and you will have a decent shot

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