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Copyright: Raimonda Augunaite (rhymea) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 167 W: 9 N: 6] (144)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-07
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/5.9, 30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Fashion, Self Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-05-08 4:09
Viewed: 6240
Favorites: 5 [view]
Points: 94
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(taken by curtain ;)
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Hi raimonda,
Great expertimental picture...but you can put little note also with your picture to understand how you had done this?
Amit

Hello Raimonda,

Welcome to TL.

Yes, a good experiment. The diffused effect from the curtain seems to work here, pity the models right eye is partially obscured. Is this a self portrait, if so it is very well done?


Kindest regards
Wayne

mystic and sensual autoportrait of a lovely new TL'ers (welcome onboard!)

It is a very nice experimentation... i like the repetitiveness of the dark spots and most of all the perfectly fits with your eyes... this repetition put emphasis on your eyes
tfs

Hi Raimonda,
Welcome to treklens. Nice shot. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497)
  • [2006-05-08 6:29]

Hi Raimonda, very cleverly done, seeing through the curtain like this. A good job, thank you.
And welcome to TL, I hope you enjoy your time here.
Janice

it's very mysterious and interesting photo :) well done!!! i like it a lot. And the model is beautiful :)

Cheers,
Agata

interesting pov here and the light is superb. Very interesting!

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  • zou Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 41 W: 26 N: 0] (238)
  • [2006-05-08 15:31]

Hi raimonda
Very nice picture, sun effect very intersting, so also your model is very nice girl ;) , she has a deep sight

well done
Zou

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  • twinn Gold Star Critiquer [C: 80 W: 0 N: 0] (88)
  • [2006-05-13 12:46]
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merhaba Raima ,
This shot is wonderful. Even though the curtain we can see the eyes ...good job..
:)

Hello
This is my turn to comment your pictures ;)
Nice girl for a beautiful pic. Take the pic through the curtain is very attractive.
TFS

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  • izler Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 482 W: 69 N: 18] (72)
  • [2006-05-15 16:12]

hi rhymea
successful self-portrait behind the curtain. pov, colours (especially eyes), sharpness and frame are great. thanks for sharing
regards
izler

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  • afoni Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 0] (1719)
  • [2006-05-20 2:57]

Merhaba Raimonda,
Excellent pose.POV and DOF.Good luck...
www.bulenterol.com

hi Raimonda,
this picture is absolutely amazing.
It gives me thrills.
great job :)

Hello,
you're really beautifull girl on this shot! You appears so mysterious...
It was a great idea!
Chears Raphsax

I agree with your intro completely! especially travelling part;)

You have a very nice gallery, Raimonda! very creative. This one I like the best - the curtain shadow adds mystery...very lovely original work.
regards!
Marija

Very well done!
Good atmosphere!!
congartulations!

Nina

nice foto ...
salam :P

Bonjour Raimonda,
great auto, very original!
Bravo, et merci.
Christian

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  • kami1 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 33 W: 0 N: 1] (78)
  • [2006-06-23 23:59]

I think it is not the curtain but the window that took the pic. Your model/friend must be happy to get a pic of her like that. The pic sure catch attention at first glance.

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  • SRB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 0 N: 51] (803)
  • [2006-06-27 11:24]
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beautifull picture, could be an advertising shot. the only thing i dislike is that the model has a bit of a stare in her eyes.
nice!
greetz
TFS
srb

Merhaba RAIMA,
Sanirim sende benim gibi turkce biliyorsun. Cok guzel bir auto fotoraf ve cok dogal bir pozision. Sana tebrikler.
Wonderful shot, amazing, and good idea. And your gallery is very original.

Regards
Hamid

Hi Raimonda, Very nice portrait, and creativity exudes from this. Well portrayed. Murray.

Merhaba canım

Well done Bravo

Wonderful model and wonderful composition, very well done.

Bravo

marco

I love it, you've inspired me.

Hi Rai
Very interesting and exiting composition. Very good idea, perfect pastel colours. The girl seems very calm. Congratulations. bye Aga

There is a dark halo under the eyes of the model and the curtain can't hide the sadness of the face.
A really great photograph.
TFS

Interesting,
the DOF is superb, you almost made the curtain net (is it?) dissapeared
the colour itself is stunning,
love it

Hi Raimonda,

Very good shot,
Such a good idea,
And very nice cropping,

Also many thanks for your kindness on my work...

Ali...

this also asks a question..try to eliminate items with contrasty colours and shapes..jewellry, chair, red cloth...simplicity with mystique is best
i like this a lot ...and the eyes..well take a few and move slightly each time to get them in a 'space' if there is one..

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  • riems Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 22 N: 51] (1795)
  • [2006-08-20 12:41]

Mysterious........ Great pose and composition. Well, done, Raimonda!

it's a shot..
SORRY wrong point.. now it's ok.
my best wishes..
umit

hi raimonda, you have some very original and impressive pictures, but this one is certainly a masterpiece
you're outfit is also very trendy by the way :-)

Love the feeling of calmness of your photography. This one is has an appealing range of earthy colors. Very peaceful and sentinmental. -Rodney

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  • netus Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 0] (38)
  • [2006-09-10 18:00]
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I curiosity. What do you looking? What are you searching? A friend? Or an adventure? You are already in an adventure! Because you are in Turkey! This is not sufficiency?

http://www.treklens.com/gallery/Middle_East/Turkey/photo164911.htm

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  • pemi71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 501 W: 13 N: 58] (2673)
  • [2006-10-11 13:27]

Sory my English is very bad!?
Nice idea and realise & good light...
Petar

it's a wonderful shot!...I like the reflex, the lights and the way we can look your eyes...you're cool!

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  • sebcz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 172 W: 31 N: 60] (869)
  • [2006-10-29 5:29]

A fine peering through effect. And a nice model. Successful photo.
Seb

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 697 W: 36 N: 423] (3851)
  • [2006-11-06 2:41]

So Fashion like! Gorgeous model...!! Lovely portrait!

Wong

fascinating portret, is this you?
regards frans273

Nice experimental picture. The inclusion of the curtain gives your shot a special mysterious mood. Did you have a remote? Well done, Yvonne

şık bir šalışma kutlarım..

This is so nice shot!!!

The effect of the curtain worked well. It adds to the mystery. The eyes were seen. Excellently displayed. Beautiful!


TFS>

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 17 N: 295] (2116)
  • [2007-02-12 11:21]

God portarit. Good idea. Enhances mystery. Wee-exposed too.

This is a great image Raimonda, fine art!
Regards Mark

Hello Raimonda,
I continue my exploration of your photo gallery... It is interesting to see how you manage to show things in an indirect but eye-catching way, by usings mirrors, rays of light or, like here, a transparent curtain. It makes your pictures very suggestive and artistic. TFS & continue the good work!
Erik

Very interesting photo, Raimonda. I really like what you have done here. Good to still be able to see the models' eyes through the curtain, while some of the frame is obscured by it. Colour and detail is still good. Good idea that worked well!

BEAUTIFUL IMAGE .......... REGARDS BOBAN.

This is beautiful. Mystic, great idea, and your such a great looking lady. :)

Lets see if I can't help to put this one over the 100 points level... deserves it... :)

I guess you don't have snow south of us there in Lithuania either... The magic never fails it will come I guess... :)

Warm regards. Francis :*

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2010-03-22 4:22]

Hello Raimonda,

Very good shot with excellent lighting and a beautiful subject.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

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