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Copyright: Felicia Noordman (Felicia) (94)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-16
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/8, 1/350 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-06 10:00
Viewed: 1715
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Our oldest chasing seagulls after a lovely picknick at the beach. I like the colors and composition especially the stubborn seagull at the background. Hope you will like it too
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I liked the overall mood of the photo and I liked her happy stance.
My suggestions (which are not to be taken too seriously as I am an amateur, too) are as follows:
- The tilted horizon should be corrected. She may look a bit bent forward after this and that is not detrimental, I think.
- I wished there was a bit space at right. Is it still possible (was this a crop)?
- I also wished to see her feet (not very important).
- Her face needs a little bit more light and there are simple tools to do that, depending on what software you use.
My best wishes to you and to your family.

hi felicia .. so beautiful composition .. i like it there is happy atmosphere in it .. have a nice day .. Harout.

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