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Ship & Plan
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Copyright: Usaf Jaffari (Usaf) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 87 N: 312] (2160)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-08-05
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 40 D, 70-300mm 1:4-5.6 SIGMA DG
Exposure: f/8, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-11-29 5:45
Viewed: 1362
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
By reading the critiques on my last post, some friends complaint that the image was a bit tilt to the left, so now Im trying to b very careful not to post any out of balance picture, but I dont know y I feel that this picture is also floating to the left side. I tried the grid to check the balance. It was fine in grid view but still I feel its........!

Lets see what u feel.
Thanks for viewing.

Live amongst people in such a manner that if you die they weep over you and if you are alive they crave for your company.
Hazrat Ali Ibn-e-Abi Talib - Nahj-ul-Balagha

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طلب ازخداحاجت است
گربرآوردہ شوّد رحمت است برآوردہ نشوّد حکمت است
طلب ازخلق خفّت است
گربرآوردہ شوّد منّت است برآوردہ نشوّد ذلّت است

Salaam Usaf
Good sharpness captured with steady hand to get accurate exposure in above 200mm of focal length while the cool blue in BG looks beautiful.


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  • brech Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 135 N: 1111] (3045)
  • [2011-11-29 20:11]

A intersting image by itself but more so with the jet and its contrails as an element of the composition.
Nicely Done

Hi Usaf. Nice shot. Your balance and composition is very nice. Perfect focus and tones. Well done.


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