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Copyright: Cato Rusten (limaz) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 12 W: 2 N: 20] (220)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-02
Categories: Abstract
Camera: Canon EOS 20D
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): When I dream I'm a shadow, Favorites [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-03 13:22
Viewed: 2800
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I like the lines in this shot.. They all converge or radiate from the person...

The shot was inspired by the thought of having one person being the nexus for everything in your life...

I think it works...

I would love some critiques on this shot as your thoughts are valuable and through your critiques I can strive to get better...


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Hi Cato,
I like the lines too. Great composition, really great. That's a favorite.TFS

gökyüzü ve ağaçlar fotoğrafta harika olmuş. fakat kızın duruşu belkide vucüt biçimi çok o fotoğrafa uymamış gibi. belki başka bir mankenle başka bir vucüt duruşu ile belkide farklı bir kıyafetle iyi olan daha iyi olabilirmiş.

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  • Enka Gold Star Critiquer [C: 98 W: 0 N: 0] (624)
  • [2007-09-03 13:45]

bonita composicion, el ambiente creado por las nubes es muy agradable.

Saludos Cato

A very nice study in Symmetry Cato! Very nice lines, the girl in the middle is interesting, LOVE the red shirt! VERY different!

1:33 AM , I will not write a lot but i like this picture, with good composition of element and dark colours, it is nearly philosophic.
Nice shot.

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  • taba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 161 N: 337] (2163)
  • [2007-09-03 18:03]

Hi Cato
very nice capture and composition
the lines are as you told in perfect harmony with the girls body...
Good colors, POV and sharpness.

Really great lighting, PP work, and colors.

Hi Cato,

Very dramatic composition. I love your use of lines here. TFS


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  • rater Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 196 W: 52 N: 111] (957)
  • [2007-09-03 19:53]

I think that the composition is great! I do agree in the lines effect, also I find the clous great.


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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2007-09-03 22:28]

Very nice shot with excellent composition and nice colors...

Hi Cato,

This is a beautiful image. But title must have been suiting one like searching paradise or sweet dream etc. But like your work no the image and the composition is superb.

Well done and Tfs.

With best regards,
Muhammad Usman Ali

Hi Cato, you're right, the lines here draw one to center and then ground, almost like lightning or something similar where the girl becomes not just a focus but a convergence. VERY well done, AAA TFS

impresive pèrspective, greatcolors and details, congratullations

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2008-01-07 1:40]

nice picture...
good depth

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer [C: 124 W: 54 N: 132] (1248)
  • [2008-03-26 12:15]


Great work Cato!
The colours are beautiful and I like the composition!

TFS Alex

Hello Cato,
I don't understand how this picture can only have 28 points, it's quite something!
It has a lot of feeling and atmosphere, very very well done...

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  • rewind Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 5 N: 133] (1139)
  • [2008-08-05 11:16]

Hi Cato, fantastic composition, convergence and perspective plus colours combine to make a superb picture, I am surprised this does not have more comments!
Best regards, Les

Hello Cato,

Indeed it works. Beautifully. This is one of the most beautiful shots I have ever seen. Great work.


Hi Rusten!
Beautifull shot, nice simetry and beautiful tones of the sky. Good contrast. Best regards Csabi

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