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Copyright: Szczepan Woszczylo (waran_Z_komodo) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 0 N: 22] (388)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-05
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon 450D, Canon EF-S 55-250mm 1:4-5.6 IS
Exposure: f/8, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-11-21 2:08
Viewed: 1386
Points: 6
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Hi Szczepan,

This is quite a nice studio shot with good contrasts and light, though I am not an expert in portrait photography, however, I feel that the shadow of hairs of your model falling on her left arm (our right) gives a black spot like appearance, which does decline the overall appeal of the shot IMHO. In addition to the fact that there is NO NOTE mentioned to this picture.

If you remember, a week ago or so, I have sounded your over the same issue of adding a note to one of your pictures posted on TL but you didn't reply back, therefore I have inactivated that picture of yours. Kindly bear with me and please add a note to your future pictures on TL.

I hope to see a note attached to this shot in the next days otherwise this post will be inactivated.

Thank you for your understanding and cooperation!

Best regards,

Paras / Moderator

A note or two would nice and be helpful. A good shot, with good, moody lighting. There is a spot of light to the right of the models right leg that could be cloned out. Also, I'm not an expert, but I think the smile is alittle out of place, for the mood of this shot.

Please add notes to your shots. Thank you.

It is very beautiful
Team composition is well
Nag is right around the light control
Good luck

Czesc Szczepan! Sliczna dziewczyna. Piekne oswietlenie. Wspaniala fotografia. Pozdrawiam!

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