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Abandoned and dirty world...


Abandoned and dirty world...
Photo Information
Copyright: Pawel Murczak (paweljg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 301 W: 56 N: 1149] (8770)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-01-03
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Artwork, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: nikon d40, Nikkor 18-55mm AF-S DX f3.5-5.6, Kingston SD 2Gb, 52mm HOYA UV filter
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-27 8:00
Viewed: 1158
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi Folks,

Just dirty word...

Enjoy...

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PP:

* crop pic
* convert to B/W
* add a bit of lighting
* add frame
* resized for TL

Photo was taken in closed "Celwiskoza" factory in Jelenia Gora - this is big complex of deserted buildings with many interesting recesses.

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Critiques and comments are welcome,

Pozdrowienia z Polski,
(Greetings from Poland)
Pawel

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Cze Pawel !
Ciekawe miejsce, ale widze ze sie tam sypie wszystko!
Fajny punkt widzenia..
Dobra kompozycja oddaje klimat miejsca i tajemniczosci...
Swietne brawo!!
Pozdr

Ania

Hi,Pawel,
A lovely B/W shot with a strong composition
TFS
Valerka:)

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 451 W: 139 N: 813] (5358)
  • [2008-03-27 10:03]

Wow!! I made a lot of photo's in old deserted buildings, so I love those shots! Also this is very good!
Many contrasts in dark and light and a good composition!!

Well done!
Janneke

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  • rebel Gold Star Critiquer [C: 229 W: 65 N: 1] (141)
  • [2008-03-27 13:41]

Czasem wydaje mi sie ze gdziekowliek bym nie pojechał zawsze spotkam podobnych ludzi, podobne miejsca, podobnie...

Czolem Pawel!
Dobra mroczna, klimatyczna fotografia. Piekne miejsce z cyklu: Strzez sie tych miejsc!
Podoba mi sie Twoja konsekwentna robota.
Serdecznosci!

Poderoso blanco y negro, me gusta esta imagen del abandono. Congratulations.

Strong message ,desolation is not accept in 2008 i think. Anaway a super black and white shot.
Bravo Mon ami Réal.

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  • Arox Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 72 W: 11 N: 48] (847)
  • [2008-03-29 0:48]

Hmm wygląda znajomo czyżby to ten unikniony 5k ticket :P A tego goscia tez skądś znam :) Fajnie oddaje klimat tego miejsca. Podoba się

Pozdro Bro

Hello Pawel,

Nice dark mood captured here. Bit of sub-culture in it. Nice.

Greetings, Dennis

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