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Eva - I will not say anything


Eva - I will not say anything
Photo Information
Copyright: Lukasz Talaga (HIMself) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 314 W: 5 N: 9] (3605)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09
Camera: Zenit 12XP, Arsat 80-200mm, kodak vr 400iso
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): • Wong Favourites •, Sesja E.O. [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-09-17 3:27
Viewed: 2162
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Polish]
first picture with session next soon, the home conditions on tla of white wall the picture scan from print so the lightly replete colours and removed hum in Ps
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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 332 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2005-09-17 4:49]

nice done Lukasz.
it is much stonger to put Eva there than in the centre of the picture.

witaj:)))
wspaniała fotografia, delikatna...¶wietny kadr, bardzo mi sie podoba:)))

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  • BAKO Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 71 W: 11 N: 8] (748)
  • [2005-09-17 5:30]

Really nice comp. Lukasz.
well done
regards
bako

sliczne jest :) i chyba bedzie moim ulubionym zdjeciem :) pozdrawiam

Hi Lukasz, beautifull composition. A high expression of tenderness and fragillety. Nice detail that she has her eyelids down, the arm gives hight to the pose. I thought the model still could use some light so I added a WS for you. I hope you don't mind...
See you again, Richard

I fact a difficult photo you really need a lot of diffuse light to make this photo.
If I look I see some noise and the photo is properly taken on a high ISO value.
The composition is fine. The skin is lovely brown in good contrast with the white sleeve.

I like the grainy effect and the use of negative space.
Cheers... and thank you!!
Carmem

Tez super zdjecie. Bardzo delikatna kompozycja, Swietnie dziala ta jasna pozostawiona przestrzen po prawej. Chociaz absolutnie zgadzam sie z DigiSpy na temat swiatla. Przy tej bieli i delikatnosci zdjecia, Ewa powinna byc duzo jasniejsza (jak na jego workshopie; przy okazji: nie pasuje mi jego tlo). Moje przypuszczenie: ona byla lekko spieta w czasie robienia tego zdjecia - sprawia wrazenie lekko skulonej. Ciekawe, czy zgadlem :-) I ostatnia uwaga - chyba byles niezdecydowany kadrujac (nie zmiescila Ci sie w kadrze) albo przycinajac (za malo obciales) zdjecie. Aczkolwiek to tylko moj odbior, zreszta nie zmienia to faktu, ze zdjecie jest bardzo udane!

pzdr

Marek

  • Great 
  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 697 W: 36 N: 423] (3851)
  • [2005-10-10 4:45]

Beautiful portrait!! I like the composition!!!

Wong

Czesc Lukasz,
Moim zdaniem to zdjecie jest najlepsze z serii. Swietny kadr.
pozdro, Markos

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1206 W: 151 N: 655] (8171)
  • [2005-12-20 12:30]

HELLO LUKASZ. I think that all your serie of Eva is truly wonderful!You managed to create a real mood and even with the same subject you don't become boring! I like the way you play with the contrasts and how you show all her beauty in a simple but effective way!
Congratulations.
Luci

really nice work, it could be used as an advertisement or something, the image is so "pure"
the composition is very well done

  • Great 
  • galba Gold Star Critiquer [C: 53 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-01-16 6:03]

Bien conseguida!

  • Great 
  • Foba Silver Star Critiquer [C: 14 W: 0 N: 0] (923)
  • [2006-01-23 16:03]

chyba bym nosek tez jej zaslonila :) podoba sie :) taki kadr ladniejszy :)

great use of the white
Paolo

Czesc Lukasz

Wszytko co mozna bylo powiedziec o zdjeciu zostalo juz powiedziane i z wszystkim sie zgadzam. Najlepsze z serii :))

Dobra robota!!!
Pozdrawiam
Jacek

Very nice picture, Lukasz. I love the pose, it is very interesting. Colour is great but would have liked a bit more detail. Otherwise it looks great!

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