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Lights and shadows


Lights and shadows
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Copyright: alin ma (alin-m) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 426 W: 5 N: 75] (2564)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-02-22
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC T300
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-05-09 6:12
Viewed: 1993
Points: 46
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Hi alin ,
Beautiful delicate flower with nice colors and soft details,well framing is is a little issue as its position is not very strong in the frame,the shallow depth in BG makes a your main subject well prominent position in the composition.

Best Regards
mushtaq

Hi, Alin Ma. The lighting and softness of the flower is the highpoint of this photo. Placement of the flower in the thirds or golden triangle for better composition is my suggestion. Cheers.

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 0 N: 4177] (21534)
  • [2010-05-09 7:01]

Hello Ali :)

Charming, pretty flower...I do not know him.
Natural colours, sharpness and light.
Splendid composition, fantastic effect
Curiously and it looks on green background very originally!
It pleases me very.

I congratulate realization.
With best wishe
Barbara

This arrangement is beautiful, Alin, like twins - one in the light, on in the shadow.
The sunlight is so warm, very pretty post, thanks.
Greetings to you from the rainy Germany
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hello Alin
Shartp details of the delicate flower. The background is very nice too. In my opinion, I think the main subject is too centered. I would have cropped to have the flower in the lower left portion if the image but it's only my opinion.
Nicely done
Serge

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2010-05-09 8:22]

hi Alin,
what a artistic presentation.eatiful colours and light.Simple and so beautiful work.congratulations.TFS.Necla.

A lovely macro capture from a subtle toned flower, with such great management of light, Alin!

I like the colors of the flower, shown with such perfect sharpness and from a well chosen POV.

I think, if you have placed the flower more offcenered, may be more to the left half of the picture, could have made it a more potential shot but overall, it is lovely shot. It is just my personal opinion so please feel free to (dis)agree!


Best greetings,
Paras

Bonjour Alin
L'effet de lumière allume joliment ces belles couleurs acidulées.
L'image manque un petit poil de netteté mais ces fleurs sont si petites...Bravo Alin et TFS.Catherine

Hello Alin ma,

Délicates fleurs d'Euphorbia milii.
Superbes détails et les couleurs lumineuses
des pétales embellissent cette ravissante composition.
Juste décentrée aurait été mieux, juste mon avis mon ami.
Belle soirée. Amitiés sincères. Yolande

Hi Alin
So lovely flower with amazing colors and great lighting
The lighting is perfect here, I don't care about the center composition here and the rest is good enough
Best wishes
Alireza

Hi Alin
fabulous unique flower.
lovely combination of colors.
well captured. good clarity.
nicely composed with blurry bg.
greetings
tsilla

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  • solrac Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1103 W: 26 N: 1025] (9012)
  • [2010-05-12 11:12]

Hola Alin
Bella imagen de esta flor con una buena iluminacion y contraste de luz y color , buen encuadre y nitidez , una agradable composicion , felicidades

Buen dia
un saludo
Carlos

Hello Alin.
Beautiful vivid colours, well composed and excellent DOF. This is a very attractive image.
Best regards Siegfried

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-05-19 5:28]

Hi Alin!
Adorabile composizione con straordinario contrasto di colori. Eccellente messa a fuoco. Splendida luce e ottimo DOF.
Forse il soggetto è troppo centrato...comunque un buon lavoro.
Congratulations.
Ciao! Vanda

Hi Alin,
Netliği çok güzel,renkleri muhteşem bir fotoğraf.
Tebrikler,
Bravo!
Ataman

Hi Alin. great work.The yellow and red is beautiful. greetings Willy

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-06-01 19:14]

dear Alin,
shining colors, yellow, orange and green, are beautiful so much against back shadows,
pretty twin figures look so lovely in this light and shadow space,
thank you for your excellent shot,
Akihisa

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-07-17 1:56]

Hello,

quelle macro sur cette fleur, elle est bi-colore, du jaune avec du rouge, quelle douces formes arrondie, comme elle s'ouvre dans de graphsiem de vert, spelndide compo.

Bravo et maitié

Nicou

Euphorbia at its best.very balanced colors and lights,perfect contrasts.lovly composition.TFS

Very nice image Alin,beautiful combination of colours and the texture of the flowers shows up nicely.

Hi Alin
Wonderful macro shot
Great light, colors and shadows
Have a nice Sunday
Burak

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2010-08-08 7:27]

Hello Alin! These are beautiful flowers my friend. You've have seen it well. The sharpness could be better I think and the subject is a bit too centered but it's still a good one, thanks!

Mario

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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10644)
  • [2010-08-08 21:45]

Hi,
I feel that I'm close to this flower but if I was there then I select a bit high position to get more of these, henece it is nice shot in vivid colours but much centered, TFS.
Regards.

Musa.

Excellent composition! Great use of natural light to divide your photo and isolate the subject. Nice colors. Well done, tfs.

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