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Copyright: Burak Oktenli (burak28) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1234 W: 91 N: 1268] (16810)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-26
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-S730
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Rivers, Streams & Bodies of Water, why backslapping is wrong [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-07-27 11:02
Viewed: 2631
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi my dear Slovenian friends
I love your beautiful country
Greetings from Turkey
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To hifimusicdai: hiKilted-Arab 1 07-28 19:57
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Selam Burak,
Hadi bakalım birbiri peşi sıra güzel fotoğraflarını bekliyorum.
Bu ikincisi, hoş bir kompozisyon
Selahattin E

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2841 W: 398 N: 3076] (34114)
  • [2009-07-27 13:51]

merhaba burak...
italya gezisinden güzel kesitler,
iyi bir tatili haketmiştin...
bizim yerimizede gez bakalım

Selam Burak!
Nice view to a beautiful place!
great colours,lighting and perspective!
Tfs Selamlar

Salam Burak
Nice shot
Good details and colors
Best wishes

Hello Burak! Nice light and shadow, very good contrast. Beautiful colours and saturation. Cosy place. Good shot. Well done!

Merhaba Burak,
Harika çekimler, muhteşem kompozisyolar...
Kutluyor gözlserinden öpüyorum.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hi Burak,
I think that your picture a first view have a little bit 'Tilt'on the right, Nice colors and détails,
beautiful place and great architecture..
Bonne journée

Hi my dear friend,

I wasn't planning to be on TL these days, but when I saw your post I needed to write my opinion on it. I am happy to hear you like SLO. Next time tell me when you'll be coming, so I can show you around. Ljubljana is my 2nd home :)

Wonderful view on Tromostovje and Sustarski most. Maybe pic is a bit tilting, but never mind, it is still nice photo. I love the colours and the composition. Great light as well.

Thanks for this image,


Amazing tourist style shot,colors are stunning so is the POV.The pattern of waves wow I can feel the freshness of breez,Very good details and DOF.TFS

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2009-07-28 7:55]


mangigique vue avec l'ombre de la barrière qui fiat uns trè beau grphsime, le fleuir sur le pont, le plan d'eau donne encore un plus à ta belle image.

bravo et amitié


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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1165 W: 2 N: 215] (16615)
  • [2009-07-28 8:30]

very beautiful and clear photograph with many details

Merhaba Burack, great view of beautiful city, splendid light and colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

very beautiful shot nice colors and mvdisco was right there's a tilt to the right...you can correct it by slight adjustment counterclocwise... nevertheless this shot was still very good


Merhaba Burak,
Güzel bir bakış açısı, güzel bir perspektif.Ufuk çizgisine dikkat Burakcığım:))


Tilted, lacking in sharpness and not really much of interest here - bit of a random snapshot. And yet your extensive "critiquing" ensures hefty backslapping from numerous members.

Shame on you, them and Treklens.

I dont agree with kilted-Arab. I believe he regards himself as one of the "elite" on this site. I like your shot however it is a little tilted so I have prepared a workshop. I hope you like.
warm regards

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 624 W: 0 N: 993] (4864)
  • [2009-07-29 7:14]

Hi Burak,
this is calm and peaceful place. The water is very still and the reflection is pretty.
I like the birightness of the white building at the back there.


Hi Burak
the photo is well composed for the natural frame of the tree on the left and houses on the right but you need to take more attention before posting!
for sure in not centered and need to be moved on the left
but David hifimusicdai made you a good workshop
Right way to learn here.



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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2009-07-29 14:43]

Hello Burak,
great shot with very good light with clarity.
Lovely the reflection on the water. Good framing.
Best regards.

The big black bridge is surelly the main attraction of this shot. An "other (great)master piece" indeed.

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