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Track... and field

Track... and field
Photo Information
Copyright: Isabelle Louy (ilouy) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-06-18
Categories: Daily Life, Abstract
Camera: Nikon D100, 105 mm Micro 2.8
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-06-23 12:39
Viewed: 1729
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Un cadrage serré (fait a la prise de vue) sur une piste d'athlétisme de Sion. J'aime ici le contraste des couleurs et les courbes... image simple mais intéressante toute de même je crois.
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To lacouette: Slight change - Big improvementdantor 1 07-10 12:55
To lacouette: I'm in a hurryilouy 1 06-23 14:11
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  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 502 W: 24 N: 1499] (12033)
  • [2004-06-23 13:04]

Yuou have very good eyes Isabelle. Mundane objects are turned into extraordinary work of art by your photographs. Very good colors and composition here. I salute you.

Very good shot. Great composition. The colors are splendid too. I did a little modification to your original just so the eye is not drawn to any point in particular. Check it out.
P.S. Will have to post tomorrow, I'm over the limit.

I love the contrasts ! Well balanced picture.

  • Great 
  • ornis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 20 N: 139] (842)
  • [2004-06-23 17:43]

Il fallait y penser, et c'est réussi. Ces courbes créent un effet dynamique et s'inscrivent très bien dans le cadrage. Une image abstraite et très graphique. Bravo.

An excellent well composed shot.
Very nice textures and contrasting colours.
Very well seen and done,great!

Very graphic. I've had a look at the WS, but I like the original better. I hate to think that we want to change reality. Nothing to nit pick here...wonderful work!

Nice shot. Clean lines, bold colours, strong texture. Lacouette did a workshop on this. By removing the lines that cross the tracks, he made the photo more abstract, which at first sight, I liked. Looking back at the original, I wonder if removing those lines did not take away a part of the "life" of the picture.

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  • ishai (77)
  • [2004-07-25 17:17]

Good capture
Well seen of these lines
Very nice crop

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