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La jonquille


La  jonquille
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Copyright: Urs Achermann (urs0114) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 672 W: 66 N: 939] (6799)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04
Categories: Food
Camera: Nikon D700, Nikkor AF-S 105mm VR f/2.8G ED IF micro, Raw/Tiff
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-02-26 16:55
Viewed: 2437
Points: 88
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Une fleur blanche et jaune sur fond bleu, mais je ne suis pas sûr de quelle variété il s'agit.
Probablement une jonquille.
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Hello Urs,

Excellent macro with great details of the heart's flower!
Perfect focus, light and contrast!
Very nice frame!
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

Hello Urs,

The backlighting is especially pretty. The pistils/stamens are sharp, and the bluish background accentuates the white petals. Regards

Danilo

Bonne nuit Urs, tres jolie :)
Great macro in a panoramic frame enhanced by the black colour.
Nicely composed and well dealed light.

Galder

sorry no more smileys...

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497)
  • [2010-02-26 18:19]

I don't think it is a jonquil, but it does look very pretty.
Good focus on teh stamens, nice and sharp. Very pretty especially against the blue background.
TFSJanice

Nice shallow Dof Urs. The centre of the flower is nice and sharp. The backlight is pretty.

Thanks

Ralph

Hello Urs,

Very nice indeed.

Regards,
Siddhartha

Bonjour Urs,
Belle prise de vue en close-up de cette belle Jonquille,
couleurs magnifiques et netteté,
excellent focus et beau contraste et lumière,
compliments
Michel

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2953 W: 139 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-02-26 22:30]

Hi Urs,
A very sharp macro shot of the heart of this white flower.
Excellent management in exposure with precise color tones.
Nice pastel yellow and blue to render this shot soft and tender.
Very nicely composed and neat.
My best regrds,

Francis Xavier

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  • scubli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 76 N: 441] (1733)
  • [2010-02-26 23:55]

Hello Urs,

A great macro with great focus and details.
Nice colors, contrast and a good BG.

Best regards,
scubli

beau cadrage urs pour cette fleur...

merci pour cet air de printemps

dd, ile de la réunion

Bonjour Urs

Belle "leçon" de macro avec ce jeu de lumière ,de transparence,de couleurs pastel qui se fondent!!!
Le cadrage et l'encadrement mettent en valeur cette superbe photo!!!
Bravo et merci pour le partage!
Catherine

Great macro photos beautiful colors and perfect focus.
Regards Zoran

Hi Urs,

This is simply a superb macro where everything seems to be on its right place!

Great sharpness, perfect details, nice contrast between the colors of the flower and the blue sky. Very well captured!

Wish you a nice weekend.

best wishes,
Paras

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2010-02-27 5:23]

Hello Urs

Good sharpness, color & framing with impeccable use of a shallow dof. The yellow pollen contrasts nicely against the patch of blue sky at left. Tfs!

Ciao Urs


The delicate flower is captured with crisp fine details!
Well exposed in the white parts,
good details in the petals...
Sharpness and colors are nice.
Composition and presentation are very well.

Sergio

Good Morning Urs,

The photograph suggests a smaller F stop than F9 but the focus on the stamens and the stigma is nice and sharp against the softness of the petals.
Interesting backlighting creating nice highlights and shadows.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Bonjour Urs
Impressive capture and macro
Excellent clarity and details
Have a nice weekend
Burak

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  • werdir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1416 W: 147 N: 2654] (11957)
  • [2010-02-27 6:28]

Hi Urs,

A lovely macro of the white flower. Good crop, and I like the frame you chose for the photo. This is a good example of how shallow DOF is in macro photography. TFS

best regards,
Werner

Hello Urs ,
Stunning macro of this lovely white flower with superb focus on her delicate heart,very well captured with amazing lighting condition,the blue soft sky in BG looks lovely,the contrast colors of stem with petals are wonderful,well done my friend.
TFS,
Have a nice w/e,
Mushtaq Hussain

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2010-02-27 8:37]

Superbe image Urs, toute en douceur et en subtilité. Exposition magnifique, lumière fantastique et une image très réussie. Bravo!

Mario

Bonsoir Urs,

Une fleur (Jonquille?) charmante et lumineuse.
Jolies étamines et anthères bien nettes.
Belle composition et subtiles couleurs.
Un ravissement pour les yeux.
Agréable journée.
Yolande

Olá Urs

Esta flor é muito bonita, gosto dos detalhes
em tom amarelo e gosto do pedacinho do céu
em um azul lindo.
Parabéns
GA
Vera

Nice capture, exquisite sharp detail on the flowers' stamens. I think it could be placed more to the right of the frame, though, for stronger composition.
Rew

Hi Urs..nice shot...great light and tones...well done.

Roger

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-02-28 0:58]

Hello Urs,

Fantastique macro, une merveille quel mise en valeur du psitil, dans ce fond doux des pétales, grandisoe compo.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-02-28 2:18]

Bonjour Urs!
Your photo is superb!!... makes it even more beautiful this flower!
Excellent POV with perfect details of the heart of the flower. Marvellous game of lights and shadows.
Une bonne semaine!
ciao! vanda

Bonjour Urs,

Beautiful macro shot of this lovely flower.
The lighting is fantastic.

Best regards,
Tatjana

Hi Urs!
Fantastic close-up and clarity.Wonderful colours and light,beautiful depth of sharpness!
Greetings
Tadeusz

Bonjour Urs
Tu as pourtant eu près d'un an pour y réfléchir... :))))
Tu nous anticipes le printemps, et ces jolies couleurs tendres font bien plaisir.
Henri

ps :au fond bleu, je reconnais une jonquille, mais c'est peut-être parce que j'ai une méthode de reconnaissance bien à moi... :)))

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2010-02-28 11:09]

Bonsoir Urs,
Quels macro simple jeu mais exceptionnel.
Magnifico votre idée. Toutes mes félicitations.
Le printemps est enfin arrivé!
Une belle soirée,
Adrian

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 854 W: 5 N: 1570] (6756)
  • [2010-02-28 12:27]

Hello Urs!
Wonderful macro!with excellent light
shade,focus and textured details!Smooth
colours and clarity are simply perfect!
TFS Kostas

Hello Urs

A great POV on this flower. We are still about a month away before the flowers start showing up. Great shot

Jimmy

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  • walk33a Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 504 W: 33 N: 525] (2015)
  • [2010-02-28 16:19]

Wow, Urs, je pense que ce pourrait être la macro la plus flagrante que j'ai vu. Détails très forte, et belle couleur. L'éclairage est magnifique avec ce parfait point de vue.

Merci de partager cela avec nous!

Très bel appareil photo que vous avez là.

Cordialement,
Dennis

Urs Oh, je suis désolée, je n'ai plus de points. :-(

Belle prise Urs, tu me surprends avec une jolie fleur aujourd'hui je n'en connais pas le nom bien entendu , je n'y connais rien en fleurs , hé hé. Pour f/9 la profondeur de champs est plutôt mince , cela ne la fait pas moins joliement appréciable ,oh que non! Le bleu du ciel rehausse le tout agréablement , bien pensé mon ami,
Carol

Hi Urs.
Very nice and interesting details from inside of this beautiful flower.
Good picture.
Best regards.Alin.

Boa noite Urs
Very good white capture im this beautiful flower presentation. The composition is very beautuful because the light.
Um abraço
teresa

Hi Urs,
What a superb macro with sharpness, colours and nice details.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

Hello Urs! Perfect work, ideal capture and exposure, good contrast and sharpness. Magic macro. Well done!

Ciao Urs, splendid closeup of wonderful white flower with fantastic details and superb sharpness, very well done, ciao Silvio

Bonjour Urs,
Magnifique macro très douce grâce aux couleurs de la fleur.
Bien vu.
Danièle.

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2010-03-04 11:29]

Hi Urs,
beautiful whiteness.Perfect light and very good presentation.TFS.Necla.

Hello URS,
Stunning macro shot!
Perfect sharpness,lovely colors, fantastic light.
Excellent composition.
TFS

Hello Urs!
Beautiful and delicate spring flower!
Good light!
Nice point of view!
All the best!
Lili

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-03-05 21:46]

dear Urs,
beautiful spring scene,
white blossom and pale blue sky make warm and tender contrast in this macro picture,
and yellow center suggests the fruit in next season,
spring atmosphere is almost in blurred space,
thank you for your wonderful shot,
Akihisa

Hola Urs
Buen primer plano de este centro de la flor con gran nitidez color y realismo , buen encuadre y excelente luz , gracias por compartir

Buen trabajo
buen fin de semana
Carlos

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  • CMJC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 193 N: 124] (1187)
  • [2010-03-08 0:50]

toute en douceur, encore un peu de blanc pour dire que l'hiver ne veut pas partir si vite...

maintenant que j'ai posté "ma" jonquille je me permets de te dire que cette fleur ne me semble pas en être une; mais qui est-elle alors ??? peu importe d'ailleurs elle est belle et j'ai dans l'idée qu'elle sentait bon; n'est-ce pas le principal ☺

Bonjour Urs,
Like the soft focus here, the stamen are pretty sharp and the soft light creates a perfect view of the petals. Overall a wonderful soft tone impression of this white flower, altogether well presented in the black frame!
Hans

Hello dear Urs!

Splendid shot and lovely macro. Very good contrasts and exposure and nice sharpness.

TFS, indeed a beautiful shot!

Best Regards,
Ali

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